Poetic Edda · heroic poems
Sigurðarkviða hin skamma
The Short Lay of Sigurd
Bellows's introduction
Guthrunarkvitha I is immediately followed in the Codex Regius by a long poem which in the manuscript bears the heading "Sigurtharkvitha," but which is clearly referred to in the prose link between it and Guthrunarkvitha I as the "short" Lay of Sigurth. The discrepancy between this reference and the obvious length of the poem has led to many conjectures, but the explanation seems to be that the "long" Sigurth lay, of which the Brot is presumably a part, was materially longer even than this poem. The efforts to reduce the "short" Sigurth lay to dimensions which would justify the appellation in comparison with other poems in the collection, either by separating it into two poems or by the rejection of many stanzas as interpolations, have been utterly inconclusive.
Although there are probably several interpolated passages, and indications of omissions are not lacking, the poem as we now have it seems to be a distinct and coherent unit. From the narrative point of view it leaves a good deal to be desired, for the reason that the poet's object was by no means to tell a story, with which his hearers were quite familiar, but to use the narrative simply as the background for vivid and powerful characterization. The lyric element, as Mogk points out, overshadows the epic throughout, and the fact that there are frequent confusions of narrative tradition does not trouble the poet at all.
The material on which the poem was based seems to have existed in both prose and verse form; the poet was almost certainly familiar with some of the other poems in the Eddic collection, with poems which have since been lost, and with the narrative prose traditions which never fully assumed verse form. The fact that he seems to have known and used the Oddrunargratr, which can hardy have been composed before 1050, and that in any case he introduces the figure of Oddrun, a relatively late addition to the story, dates the poem as late as the end of the eleventh century, or even the first half of the twelfth. There has been much discussion as to where it was composed, the debate centering chiefly on the reference to glaciers (stanza 8). There is something to be said in favor of Greenland as the original home of the poem (cf. introductory note to Atlakvitha), but the arguments for Iceland are even stronger; Norway in this case is practically out of the question.
The narrative features of the poem are based on the German rather than the Norse elements of the story (cf. introductory note to Gripisspo), but the poet has taken whatever material he wanted without much discrimination as to its source. By the year 1100 the story of Sigurth, with its allied legends, existed throughout the North in many and varied forms, and the poem shows traces of variants of the main story which do not appear elsewhere.
Of old did SigurthGjuki seek,The Volsung young,in battles victor;Well he trustedthe brothers twain,With mighty oathsamong them sworn.
Note
Gjuki: father of the brothers twain, Gunnar and Hogni, and of Guthrun. In this version of the story Sigurth goes straight to the home of the Gjukungs after his victory over the dragon Fafnir, without meeting Brynhild on the way (cf. Gripisspo, 13 and note). Volsung: Sigurth's grandfather was Volsung; cf. Fra Dautha Sinfjotla and note. Oaths: regarding the blood-brotherhood sworn by Sigurth, Gunnar, and Hogni cf. Brot, 18 and note.
A maid they gave him,and jewels many,Guthrun the young,the daughter of Gjuki;They drank and spakefull many a day,Sigurth the youngand Gjuki's sons.
Thereafter went theyBrynhild to woo,And so with themdid Sigurth ride,The Volsung young,in battle valiant,—Himself would have had herif all he had seen.
Note
Brynhild: on the winning of Brynhild by Sigurth in Gunnar's shape cf. Gripisspo, 37 and note. The poet here omits details, and in stanzas 32-39 appears a quite different tradition regarding the winning of Brynhild, which I suspect he had in mind throughout the poem.
The southern herohis naked sword,Fair-flashing, letbetween them lie;(Nor would he comethe maid to kiss;)The Hunnish kingin his arms ne'er heldThe maiden he gaveto Gjuki's sons.
Note
Southern hero: Sigurth, whose Frankish origin is seldom wholly lost sight of in the Norse versions of the story. On the episode of the sword cf. Gripisspo, 41 and note. Line 3 may well be an interpolation; both lines 4 and 5 have also been questioned, and some editions combine line 5 with lines 1-3 of stanza 5. Hunnish king: Sigurth, who was, of course, not a king of the Huns, but was occasionally so called in the later poems owing to the lack of ethnological distinction made by the Norse poets (cf. Guthrunarkvitha I, 24 and note).
Ill she had known notin all her life,And nought of the sorrowsof men she knew;Blame she had not,nor dreamed she should bear it,But cruel the fatesthat among them came.
Note
This stanza may refer, as Gering thinks, merely to the fact that Brynhild lived happy and unsuspecting as Gunnar's wife until the fatal quarrel with Guthrun (cf. Gripisspo, 45 and note) revealed to her the deceit whereby she had been won, or it may refer to the version of the story which appears in stanza 32-39, wherein Brynhild lived happily with Atli, her brother, until he was attacked by Gunnar and Sigurth, and was compelled to give his sister to Gunnar, winning her consent thereto by representing Gunnar as Sigurth, her chosen hero (cf. Guthrunarkvitha I, 24 and note). The manuscript marks line 4 as the beginning of a new stanza, and many editors combine it with stanza 6.
By herself at the endof day she sat,And in open wordsher heart she uttered:"I shall Sigurth have,the hero young,E'en though withinmy arms he die.
Note
Brynhild has now discovered the deceit that has been practised on her. That she had loved Sigurth from the outset (cf. stanza 40) fits well with the version of the story wherein Sigurth meets her before he comes to Gunnar's home (the version not used in this poem), or the one outlined in the note on stanza 5, but does not accord with the story of Sigurth's first meeting Brynhild in Gunnar's form—an added reason for believing that the poet in stanzas 5-6 had in mind the story represented by stanzas 32-39. The hero: the manuscript originally had the phrase thus, then corrected it to "though I die," and finally crossed out the correction. Many editions have "I."
Cited on Brynhildr
"The word I have spoken;soon shall I rue it,His wife is Guthrun,and Gunnar's am I;Ill Norns set for melong desire."
Note
Perhaps a line is missing after line 3.
Cited on The Norns
Oft did she gowith grieving heartOn the glacier's iceat even-tide,When Guthrun thento her bed was gone,And the bedclothes Sigurthabout her laid.
Note
Glacier: a bit of Icelandic (or Greenland) local color.
"(Now Gjuki's childto her lover goes,)And the Hunnish kingwith his wife is happy;Joyless I amand mateless ever,Till cries from my heavyheart burst forth."
Note
Line 1 does not appear in the manuscript, and is based on a conjecture by Bugge. Some editions add line 2 to stanza 8. The manuscript indicates line 3 as the beginning of a stanza, and some editors assume a gap of two lines after line 4. Hunnish king: cf. stanza 4.
In her wrath to battleshe roused herself:"Gunnar, nowthou needs must loseLands of mineand me myself,No joy shall I havewith the hero ever.
Note
Lands: Brynhild's wealth again points to the story represented by stanzas 32-39; elsewhere she is not spoken of as bringing wealth to Gunnar.
Cited on Brynhildr
"Back shall I farewhere first I dwelt,Among the kinthat come of my race,To wait there, sleepingmy life away,If Sigurth's deaththou shalt not dare,(And best of heroesthou shalt not be.)
Note
Line 5, or perhaps line 3, may be interpolated.
"The son shall farewith his father hence,And let not longthe wolf-cub live;Lighter to payis the vengeance-priceAfter the deedif the son is dead."
Note
The son: the three-year-old son of Sigurth and Guthrun, Sigmund, who was killed at Brynhild's behest.
Sad was Gunnar,and bowed with grief,Deep in thoughtthe whole day through;Yet from his heartit was ever hidWhat deed most fittinghe should find,(Or what thing bestfor him should be,Or if he should seekthe Volsung to slay,For with mighty longingSigurth he loved.)
Note
This stanza has been the subject of many conjectural emendations. Some editions assume a gap after line 2, and make a separate stanza of lines 3-7; others mark lines 5-7 as spurious. The stanza seems to have been expanded by repetition. Grief (line 1): the manuscript has "wrath," involving a metrical error.
Cited on Gunnarr
Much he ponderedfor many an hour;Never beforewas the wonder knownThat a queen should thusher kingdom leave;In counsel thendid he Hogni call,(For him in truesttrust he held.)
Note
Bugge and Gering transfer lines 4-5 to the beginning of stanza 16, on the basis of the Volsungasaga paraphrase, and assume a gap of one line after line 3. Line 5, which is in the nature of a stereotyped clause, may well be interpolated.
"More than allto me is Brynhild,Buthli's child,the best of women;My very lifewould I sooner loseThan yield the loveof yonder maid.
Note
After "Buthli" in line 2 the manuscript has "my brother," apparently a scribal error. In line 4 the manuscript has "wealth" instead of "love," apparently with stanza 10 in mind, but the Volsungasaga paraphrase has "love," and many editors have suspected an error.
Cited on Gunnarr
"Wilt thou the herofor wealth betray?'Twere good to havethe gold of the Rhine,And all the hoardin peace to hold,And waiting fortunethus to win."
Note
Cf. note on stanza 14. After thus adding lines 4-5 of stanza 14 at the beginning of stanza 16, Gering marks line 4 as probably spurious; others reject both lines 3 and 4 as mere repetitions. Rhine: the Rhine, the sands of which traditionally contained gold, was apparently the original home of the treasure of the Nibelungs, converted in the North to Andvari's treasure (cf. Reginsmol, 1-9). That greed for Sigurth's wealth was one of the motives for his slaying is indicated likewise in Guthrunarkvitha I, 20, and in the German versions of the story.
Few the wordsof Hogni were:"Us it beseems notso to do,To cleave with swordsthe oaths we swore,The oaths we sworeand all our vows.
Cited on Högni
"We know no mightiermen on earthThe while we fouro'er the folk hold sway,And while the Hunnishhero lives,Nor higher kinshipthe world doth hold.
Note
We four: if line 1 of stanza 19 is spurious, or the reference therein to "five" is a blunder, as may well be the case, then the "four" are Sigurth and the three brothers, Gunnar, Hogni, and Gotthorm. But it may be that the poet had in mind a tradition which, as in the Thithrekssaga, gave Gjuki a fourth son, in which case the "four" refers only to the four Gjukungs. Hunnish hero: Sigurth; cf. stanza 4 and note. Some editions put line 4 between lines 1 and 2. Some add lines 1-2 of stanza 19 to stanza 18, marking them as spurious.
"If sons we fiveshall soon beget,Great, methinks,our race shall grow;Well I seewhence lead the ways;Too bitter faris Brynhild's hate."
Note
We five: see note on preceding stanza. Some editors mark lines 1-2 as spurious, and either assume a gap of two lines after line 4 or combine lines 3-4 with stanza 20. Whence lead the ways: a proverbial expression signifying "whence the trouble comes."
Gunnar spake:"Gotthorm to wrathwe needs must rouse,Our younger brother,in rashness blind;He entered notin the oaths we swore,The oaths we sworeand all our vows."
Note
The manuscript does not name the speaker. Gotthorm (the name is variously spelt): half-brother of Gunnar and Hogni (cf. Hyndluljoth, 27 and note, and Brot, 4 and note). The name is the northern form of Gundomar; a prince of this name is mentioned in the Lex Burgundionum, apparently as a brother of Gundahari (Gundicarius). In the Nibelungenlied the third brother is called Gernot.
It was easy to rousethe reckless one...............The sword in the heartof Sigurth stood.
Note
No gap is indicated in the manuscript, and many editors combine stanza 21 with stanza 22, but it seems likely that not only two lines, but one or more stanzas in addition, have been lost; cf. Brot, 4, and also the detailed account of the slaying of Sigurth in the Volsungasaga, wherein, as here, Sigurth is killed in his bed (cf. stanza 24) and not in the forest.
Cited on Sigurðr
In vengeance the herorose in the hall,And hurled his swordat the slayer bold;At Gotthorm flewthe glittering steelOf Gram full hardfrom the hand of the king.
Note
Some editions combine lines 3-4 with stanza 23. Gram: Sigurth's sword (cf. Reginsmol, prose after stanza 14); the word here, however, may not be a proper name, but may mean "the hero."
Cited on Gramr
The foeman cleftasunder fell,Forward handsand head did sink,And legs and feetdid backward fall.
Note
A line may well have been lost from this stanza.
Guthrun softin her bed had slept,Safe from careat Sigurth's side;She woke to findher joy had fled,In the blood of the friendof Freyr she lay.
Note
Freyr: if the phrase "the friend of Freyr" means anything more than "king" (cf. Rigsthula, 46 etc.), which I doubt, it has reference to the late tradition that Freyr, and not Othin, was the ancestor of the Volsungs (cf. Helgakvitha Hundingsbana I, 57 and note).
Cited on Guðrún
So hard she smoteher hands togetherThat the hero rose up,iron-hearted:"Weep not, Guthrun,grievous tears,Bride so young,for thy brothers live.
Note
Müllenhoff thinks this stanza, or at any rate lines 1-2, a later addition based on stanza 29.
"Too young, methinks,is my son as yet,He cannot fleefrom the home of his foes;Fearful and deadlythe plan they found,The counsel newthat now they have heeded.
Note
My son: Sigmund; cf. stanza 12 and note, and also Brot, 9 and note.
"No son will ride,though seven thou hast,To the Thing as the sonof their sister rides;Well I seewho the ill has worked,On Brynhild alonelies the blame for all.
Note
Sigurth means that although Guthrun may have seven sons by a later marriage, none of them will equal Sigmund, "son of their (i.e., Gunnar's and Hogni's) sister." Thing: council.
"Above all menthe maiden loved me,Yet false to GunnarI ne'er was found;I kept the oathsand the kinship I swore;Of his queen the lovernone may call me.
Note
Sigurth's protestation of guiltlessness fits perfectly with the story of his relations with Brynhild used in this poem, but not, of course, with the alternative version, used in the Gripisspo and elsewhere, wherein Sigurth meets Brynhild before he woos her for Gunnar, and they have a daughter, Aslaug.
In a swoon she sankwhen Sigurth died;So hard she smoteher hands togetherThat all the cupsin the cupboard rang,And loud in the courtyardcried the geese.
Note
Cf. Guthrunarkvitha I, 15.
Then Brynhild, daughterof Buthli, laughed,Only once,with all her heart,When as she layfull loud she heardThe grievous wailof Gjuki's daughter.
Note
Cf. Brot, 10.
Cited on Brynhildr
Then Gunnar, monarchof men, spake forth:"Thou dost not laugh,thou lover of hate,In gladness there,or for aught of good;Why has thy faceso white a hue,Mother of ill?Foredoomed thou art.
Note
Line 1 may well be a mere expansion of "Gunnar spake." The manuscript marks line 4 as the beginning of a new stanza, and some editions combine lines 4-5 with stanza 32.
"A worthier womanwouldst thou have beenIf before thine eyeswe had Atli slain;If thy brother's bleedingbody hadst seenAnd the bloody woundsthat thou shouldst bind."
Note
This stanza, which all editors have accepted as an integral part of the poem, apparently refers to the same story represented by stanzas 37-39, which most editors have (I believe mistakenly) marked as interpolated. As is pointed out in the notes on stanzas 3, 5, 6 and 10, the poet throughout seems to have accepted the version of the story wherein Gunnar and Sigurth besiege Atli, and are bought off by the gift of Atli's sister, Brynhild, to Gunnar as wife, her consent being won by Atli's representation that Gunnar is Sigurth (cf. also Guthrunarkvitha I, 24 and note).
Brynhild spake:"None mock thee, Gunnar!thou hast mightily fought,But thy hatred littledoth Atli heed;Longer than thou,methinks, shall he live,And greater in mightshall he ever remain.
Note
The manuscript does not name the speaker, and some editions add a first line: "Then Brynhild, daughter of Buthli, spake."
"To thee I say,and thyself thou knowest,That all these illsthou didst early shape;No bonds I knew,nor sorrow bore,And wealth I hadin my brother's home.
Note
Cf. stanza 5.
Cited on Brynhildr
"Never a husbandsought I to have,Before the Gjukungsfared to our land;Three were the kingson steeds that came,—Need of their journeynever there was.
Note
Three kings: Gunnar, Hogni, and Sigurth.
"To the hero greatmy troth I gaveWho gold-decked saton Grani's back;Not like to thinewas the light of his eyes,(Nor like in formand face are ye,)Though kingly bothye seemed to be.
Note
Some editions place this stanza after stanza 39, on the theory that stanzas 37-39 are interpolated. Line 4, as virtually a repetition of line 3, has generally been marked as spurious. In this version of the winning of Brynhild it appears that Atli pointed out Sigurth as Gunnar, and Brynhild promptly fell in love with the hero whom, as he rode on Grani and was decked with some of the spoils taken from Fafnir, she recognized as the dragon's slayer. Thus no change of form between Sigurth and Gunnar was necessary. The oath to marry Gunnar had to be carried out even after Brynhild had discovered the deception.
Cited on Grani
"And so to medid Atli sayThat share in our wealthI should not have,Of gold or lands,if my hand I gave not;(More evil yet,the wealth I should yield,)The gold that hein my childhood gave me,(The wealth from himin my youth I had.)
Note
Most editors mark stanzas 37-39 as interpolated, but cf. note on stanza 32. Stanza 37 has been variously emended. Lines 4 and 6 look like interpolated repetitions, but many editors make two stanzas, following the manuscript in beginning a new stanza with line 4. After line 1 Grundtvig adds: "Son of Buthli, and brother of mine." After line 6 Bugge adds: "Not thou was it, Gunnar, who Grani rode, / Though thou my brother with rings didst buy." Regarding Brynhild's wealth cf. stanza 10 and note.
"Oft in my mindI pondered muchIf still I should fight,and warriors fell,Brave in my byrnie,my brother defying;That would widein the world be known,And sorrow for manya man would make.
Note
Brynhild here again appears as a Valkyrie. The manuscript marks line 4 as the beginning of a new stanza. Any one of the last three lines may be spurious.
"But the bond at lastI let be made,For more the hoardI longed to have,The rings that the sonof Sigmund won;No other's treasuree'er I sought.
Note
Some editions combine this stanza with lines 4-5 of stanza 38, with lines 1-2 of stanza 40, or with the whole of stanza 40. The bond: Brynhild thought she was marrying Sigurth, owner of the treasure, whereas she was being tricked into marrying Gunnar.
Cited on Brynhildr
"One aloneof all I loved,Nor changing heartI ever had;All in the endshall Atli know,When he hears I have goneon the death-road hence."******
Cited on Brynhildr
"Never a wifeof fickle willYet to anotherman should yield...............So vengence for allmy ills shall come."
Note
At this point there seem to be several omissions. Brynhild's statement in lines 1-2 seems to refer to the episode, not here mentioned but told in detail in the Volsungasaga, of Sigurth's effort to repair the wrong that has been done her by himself giving up Guthrun in her favor, an offer which she refuses. The lacuna here suggested, which is not indicated in the manuscript, may be simply a single line (line 1) or a stanza or more. After line 2 there is almost certainly a gap of at least one stanza, and possibly more, in which Brynhild states her determination to die.
Up rose Gunnar,the people's ruler,And flung his armsround her neck so fair;And all who came,of every kind,Sought to hold herwith all their hearts.
Note
Hardly any two editions agree as to the arrangement of the lines in stanzas 42-44. I have followed the manuscript except in transposing line 4 of stanza 43 to this position from the place it holds in the manuscript after line 4 of stanza 44. All the other arrangements involve the rejection of two or more lines as spurious and the assumption of various gaps. Gering and Sijmons both arrange the lines thus: 42, 1-2; two-line gap; 43, 3 (marked probably spurious); 44, 1-4; 43-4 (marked probably spurious); 42, 3-4; 43, 1-2.
But back she castall those who came,Nor from the long roadlet them hold her;In counsel thendid he Hogni call:"Of wisdom nowfull great is our need.
Note
Cf. note on preceding stanza.
"Let the warriors herein the hall come forth,Thine and mine,for the need is mighty,If haply the queenfrom death they may hold,Till her fearful thoughtswith time shall fade."
Note
Cf. note on stanza 42.
(Few the wordsof Hogni were:)"From the long road nowshall ye hold her not,That born againshe may never be!Foul she camefrom her mother forth,And born she wasfor wicked deeds,(Sorrow to manya man to bring.)"
Note
Perhaps the remains of two stanzas; the manuscript marks line 4 as the beginning of a new stanza, and after line 4 an added line has been suggested: "She was ever known for evil thoughts." On the other hand, line 1, identical with line 1 of stanza 17, may well be a mere expansion of "Hogni spake," and line 6 may have been introduced, with a slight variation, from line 5 of stanza 38. Born again: this looks like a trace of Christian influence (the poem was composed well after the coming of Christianity to Iceland) in the assumption that if Brynhild killed herself she could not be "born again" (cf. concluding prose to Helgakvitha Hundingsbana II).
Cited on Högni
From the speaker gloomilyGunnar turned,For the jewel-bearerher gems was dividing;On all her wealthher eyes were gazing,On the bond-women slainand the slaughtered slaves.
Note
The manuscript marks line 3 as beginning a stanza; some editions treat lines 1-2 as a separate stanza, and combine lines 3-4 with lines 1-2 of stanza 47. Jewel-bearer (literally "land of jewels"): woman, here Brynhild. Bond-women, etc.: in stanza 69 we learn that five female slaves and eight serfs were killed to be burned on the funeral pyre, and thus to follow Sigurth in death.
Her byrnie of goldshe donned, and grimWas her heart ere the pointof her sword had pierced it;On the pillow at lasther head she laid,And, wounded, her planshe pondered o'er.
Note
The manuscript marks line 3, and not line 1, as beginning a stanza, and some editions treat lines 3-4 as a separate stanza, or combine them with stanza 48.
Cited on Brynhildr
"Hither I willthat my women comeWho gold are fainfrom me to get;Necklaces fashionedfair to eachShall I give, and cloth,and garments bright."
Note
Brynhild means, as stanzas 49-51 show, that those of her women who wish to win rewards must be ready to follow her in death. The word translated "women" in line 1 is conjectural, but the general meaning is clear enough.
Silent were allas so she spake,And all togetheranswer made:"Slain are enough;we seek to live,Not thus thy womenshall honor win."
Note
In place of "as so she spake" in line 1 the manuscript has "of their plans they thought," which involves a metrical error.
Long the woman,linen-decked, pondered,——Young she was,—and weighed her words:"For my sake nowshall none unwillingOr loath to dieher life lay down.
"But little of gemsto gleam on your limbsYe then shall findwhen forth ye fareTo follow me,or of Menja's wealth...............
Note
No gap indicated in the manuscript; many editions place it between lines 3 and 4. Menja's wealth: gold; the story of the mill Grotti, whereby the giantesses Menja and Fenja ground gold for King Frothi, is told in the Grottasongr.
"Sit now, Gunnar!for I shall speakOf thy bride so fairand so fain to die;Thy ship in harborhome thou hast not,Although my lifeI now have lost.
Note
With this stanza begins Brynhild's prophesy of what is to befall Gunnar, Guthrun, Atli, and the many others involved in their fate. Line 3 is a proverbial expression meaning simply "your troubles are not at an end."
"Thou shalt Guthrun requitemore quick than thou thinkest,..............Though sadly mournsthe maiden wiseWho dwells with the king,o'er her husband dead.
Note
No gap is indicated in the manuscript; one suggestion for line 2 runs: "Grimhild shall make her to laugh once more." Gering suggests a loss of three lines, and joins lines 3-4 with stanza 54.
"A maid shall thenthe mother bear;Brighter farthan the fairest daySvanhild shall be,or the beams of the sun.
Note
Probably a line has been lost from this stanza. Grundtvig adds as a new first line: "Her shalt thou find in the hall of Half." Some editions query line 3 as possibly spurious. Svanhild: the figure of Svanhild is exceedingly old. The name means "Swan-Maiden-Warrior," applying to just such mixtures of swan-maiden and Valkyrie as appear in the Völundarkvitha. Originally part of a separate tradition, Svanhild appears first to have been incorporated in the Jormunrek (Ermanarich) story as the unhappy wife of that monarch, and much later to have been identified as the daughter of Sigurth and Guthrun, thus linking the two sets of legends.
"Guthrun a noblehusband thou givest,Yet to many a warriorwoe will she bring,Not happily weddedshe holds herself;Her shall Atlihither seek,(Buthli's son,and brother of mine.)
Note
Line 2 in the original is almost totally obscure. Line 4 should very possibly precede line 2, while line 5 looks like an unwarranted addition.
Cited on Brynhildr
"Well I rememberhow me ye treatedWhen ye betrayed mewith treacherous wiles;..............Lost was my joyas long as I lived.
Note
This stanza probably ought to follow stanza 52, as it refers solely to the winning of Brynhild by Gunnar and Sigurth. Müllenhoff regards stanzas 53-55 as interpolated. The manuscript indicates no gap after line 3.
"Oddrun as wifethou fain wouldst win,But Atli thisfrom thee withholds;Yet in secret trystye twain shall love;She shall hold thee dear,as I had doneIf kindly fateto us had fallen.
Note
Stanzas 57-58 seem to be the remains of two stanzas, but the Volsungasaga paraphrase follows closely the form here given. Line 3 may well be spurious; line 5 has likewise been questioned. Oddrun: this sister of Atli and Brynhild, known mainly through the Oddrunargratr, is a purely northern addition to the cycle, and apparently one of a relatively late date. She figures solely by reason of her love affair with Gunnar.
Cited on Oddrún
"Ill to theeshall Atli bring,When he casts thee downin the den of snakes.
Note
Possibly two lines have been lost; many editions combine the two remaining lines with lines 1-3 of stanza 59. Concerning the manner of Gunnar's death cf. Drap Niflunga.
"But soon thereafterAtli tooHis life, methinks,as thou shalt lose,(His fortune loseand the lives of his sons;)Him shall Guthrun,grim of heart,With the biting bladein his bed destroy.
Note
Line 3 may well be spurious, as it is largely repetition. The manuscript has "sofa" ("sleep") in place of "sona" ("sons"), but the Volsungasaga paraphrase says clearly "sons." The slaying of Atli by Guthrun in revenge for his killing of her brothers is told in the two Atli lays. The manuscript marks line 4 as the beginning of a new stanza, and some editions make a separate stanza out of lines 4-5, or else combine them with stanza 60.
"It would better beseemthy sister fairTo follow her husbandfirst in death,If counsel goodto her were given,Or a heart akinto mine she had.
Note
To follow in death: this phrase is not in Regius, but is included in late paper manuscripts, and has been added in most editions.
"Slowly I speak,—but for my sakeHer life, methinks,she shall not lose;She shall wander overthe tossing waves,To where Jonak ruleshis father's realm.
Note
Jonak: this king, known only through the Hamthesmol and the stories which, like this one, are based thereon, is another purely northern addition to the legend. The name is apparently of Slavic origin. He appears solely as Guthrun's third husband and the father of Hamther, Sorli, and Erp (cf. introductory prose to Guthrunarhvot).
"Sons to himshe soon shall bear,Heirs therewithof Jonak's wealth;But Svanhild faraway is sent,The child she boreto Sigurth brave.
Note
Svanhild: cf. stanza 54 and note.
Cited on Svanhildr
"Bikki's wordher death shall be,For dreadful the wrathof Jormunrek;So slain is allof Sigurth's race,And greater the woeof Guthrun grows.
Note
Bikki: Svanhild is married to the aged Jormunrek (Ermanarich), but Bikki, one of his followers, suggests that she is unduly intimate with Jormunrek's son, Randver. Thereupon Jormunrek has Randver hanged, and Svanhild torn to pieces by wild horses. Ermanarich's cruelty and his barbarous slaying of his wife and son were familiar traditions long before they became in any way connected with the Sigurth cycle (cf. introductory note to Gripisspo).
Cited on Svanhildr
"Yet one boonI beg of thee,The last of boonsin my life it is:Let the pyre be builtso broad in the fieldThat room for us allwill ample be,(For us who slainwith Sigurth are.)
Note
Line 5 is very probably spurious.
Cited on Brynhildr
"With shields and carpetscover the pyre,..............Shrouds full fair,and fallen slaves,And besides the Hunnishhero burn me.
Note
The manuscript indicates no gap; a suggested addition runs "Gold let there be, and jewels bright." Fallen slaves: cf. stanza 66 and 69. Hunnish hero: cf. stanza 4 and note.
"Besides the Hunnishhero thereSlaves shall burn,full bravely decked,Two at his headand two at his feet,A brace of houndsand a pair of hawks,For so shall allbe seemly done.
Note
In place of lines 3-4 the manuscript has one line "Two at his head, and a pair of hawks"; the addition is made from the Volsungasaga paraphrase. The burning or burying of slaves or beasts to accompany their masters in death was a general custom in the North. The number of slaves indicated in this stanza does not tally with the one given in stanza 69, wherefore Vigfusson rejects most of this stanza.
"Let between uslie once moreThe steel so keen,as so it layWhen both withinone bed we were,And wedded matesby men were called.
Note
Cf. Gripisspo, 41 and note. After line 1 the manuscript adds the phrase "bright, ring-decked," referring to the sword, but it is metrically impossible, and many editions omit it.
Cited on Brynhildr
"The door of the hallshall strike not the heelOf the hero fairwith flashing rings,If hence my followinggoes with him;Not mean our faringforth shall be.
Note
The door: The gate of Hel's domain, like that of Mengloth's house (cf. Svipdagsmol, 26 and note), closes so fast as to catch any one attempting to pass through. Apparently the poet here assumes that the gate of Valhall does likewise, but that it will be kept open for Sigurth's retinue.
"Bond-women fiveshall follow him,And eight of my thralls,well-born are they,Children with me,and mine they wereAs gifts that Buthlihis daughter gave.
Note
Cf. stanza 66.
"Much have I told thee,and more would sayIf fate more spacefor speech had given;My voice grows weak,my wounds are swelling;Truth I have said,and so I die."